broken path
takes our weary selves
to a ridge
where we read
the history of cravings
carved into the earth
Shadorma November: 6 of 30
broken path
takes our weary selves
to a ridge
where we read
the history of cravings
carved into the earth
Shadorma November: 6 of 30
along the interstice 
[…] shadorma, inspired by Eliot’s CLEAR-CUT at Along the Interstice, left there as a comment in a slightly different […]
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WOW! I feel so sad and free.
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🙂
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Really good!
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Wow this really hit!
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thanks.
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[…] Shadorma for the Along the interstice poetry challenge. Inspired by the children’s visit on […]
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[…] Dybden,” at Along the Interstice, has named this month Shadorma November (ShaNov). This is my sixth shadorma for November, using a […]
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what could be
flows through what would be
as our dreams
remind us
we’re not always meant to be
all we think should be
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sage words indeed
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Another great one, Eliot. World-weary, but striving.
I put a couple of Shadorma (what did we decide the plural is? 🙂 ) in my Monday Musings.
https://merrildsmith.wordpress.com/2017/11/06/starry-nights-musing-and-shadorma-challenge/
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[…] I missed a couple days of Eliot of Along the Interstice’s November Shadorma Challenge, […]
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