when we met
for coffee that day
and chattered
on and on
could we have actually seen
tenderness hiding
Shadorma November: 11 of 30
when we met
for coffee that day
and chattered
on and on
could we have actually seen
tenderness hiding
Shadorma November: 11 of 30
along the interstice 
Hiding or scorched… this made me wonder lol
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😉
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It was a subjective rendering of thought relative to a similiar experiences 🙂
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there’s been a scorching here and there in my past
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I hear you, same here.
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Nice, one of those recognizable moments that aren’t often put into words.
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Thanks
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I love this.
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🙂 🙂
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🙂
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One would like to think of tenderness still there.
It makes me think of my parents, who were married to and divorced from each other twice.
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sometimes we can’t see what is right there in front of our eyes… other times we see what we want to see
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Yes, very true.
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The unspoken…how often we rehearse what we should have said, but didn’t.
Here’s mine for today
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This talks to me! Lovely!
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thank you
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