looking down
i ask of the twig
how far have
you fallen
for there are many branches
that reach for the sky
Shadorma November: 19 of 30
Note: This Shadorma came from an unrelated exercise in a poetry writing workshop that i attended yesterday.
Check out the awesome folks below who are participating in ShaNov:
along the interstice 
wonderful! Enjoying your blog.
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thank you
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I like this idea/image.
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🙂
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[…] And another shadorma for Shadorma November, sponsored by along the interstice. […]
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I really like this one Eliot. It has the aura of the voice of Kahlil Gibran.
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That is quite the compliment. Thank you.
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[…] to Eliot Dybden’s Shadorma November at Along the Interstice. A shadorma has six lines with no rhyme or meter, except for a syllable structure of […]
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[…] This is for the Along the interstice November challenge […]
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Been out collecting fallen branches 🙂
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have a front moving in fast today, so we should get a few branches to choose around here.
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They always come in useful.
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[…] Library, this is my seventeenth shadorma for Eliot Dybden’s Shadorma November (ShaNov) at Along the Interstice. A shadorma has six lines with no rhyme or meter, except for a syllable structure of 3/5/3/3/7/5. […]
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Echoing Kerfe–food for thought here and thank you for hosting.
I’m thinking of that twig now.
I hope you enjoyed the workshop!
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Yeah the two sessions approached form (and thus function) in intriguing ways. Plus, I am beginning to know the other poets in town, which is new for me, so I know a number of people at the workshop. It’s a small community as one might imagine a poetry community to be.
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Food for thought on a Sunday morning…
and thanks for hosting this! (K)
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my pleasure, definitely. personally there will be a sense of accomplishment when this comes to a conclusion.
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Yes I think so.
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